May 07, 2008
Wednesday Poem
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Love Song
Julie King
My father is dying, and my mother
has never been so in love. It's not
over death she's swooning;
it's the sweetness that has softened
him. She lotions and socks his feet, shaves
his cheeks so he's fresh for their evening
date in the dusk-quilted bed, the oxygen
tank murmuring in the background.
As she fine-tunes the tubes in his nostrils,
she smooths his wisps, sighs, "Oh, sweetheart."
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Posted by Jim Culleny at 08:02 AM | Permalink




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The first line of this poem is like a punch to the gut; no lyrical imagery, just, "My father is dying." The rest of the poem is stunning with its simple but captivating imagery. It made my heart ache.
Posted by: Rachael | May 7, 2008 11:59:46 AM
'As she fine-tunes the tubes in his nostrils...'
This is where the poem really came together for me. Fine-tune is illuminates the relationship, the nature of the awaited date, and love itself.
Oh, and the dusk-quilted bed, of course :)
Did anyone see Derek Walcott's poem in NYRB?
Posted by: Bilal | May 7, 2008 5:43:34 PM
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